Goodness persuading someone is harder then you think! In class learning the structure was a lot to take in plus that we have to use really hard words to engage the writer we have been looking up pictures of structures and the meanings of really hard words.
well turns out I’m not so smart cause I learned why the structure is important and what the structure is. I learnt that I have to be engaging in my writing and I have to be pashinet in what I write.
I really need to work on finding good evidence cause I can’t seem to work out how to have good engaging evidence that’s persuasive.